Persuasive Writing Planning

Notes from class:

An end to crime would be a catastrophe for the United Kingdom

Basic Arguments

A huge number of industries depend on the existence of crime

  • Insurance
  • Police/ Prisons
  • Repairs
  • Rehabilitation/ Counselling

Ending crime would result in mass unemployment

Who wants to see a film set in a world without crime?

At least 6 statistics

  • The current police force employs 600,000 people
  • Prison services employ 420,000
  • Businesses building structures connected with policing and jailing employ more than 1million
  • Prison construction creates more than £2billion per year
  • The insurance industry employs more than 2million
  • The glazing industry generates £4billion per year

At least four quotations