Thinking about things, I couldn’t help but feel…
· Explain what your character is feeling
· What had happened to them that made them go to where they are now
· What are they thinking about?
There was nothing I could do about it now…
· What has your character decided to do?
· Has anything changed?
· Where are they going?
· Describe them leaving your setting.
There was nothing I could do about it now. He was gone, and he wouldn’t be coming back. It was my responsibility now to look after my sister. It would be hard to live in the same house, but I knew I had no choice. I stood up and dusted the sand from my legs. It was cold and dark now. In the dim evening, I began walking home.
Thinking about things, I couldn’t help but feel…
· Explain what your character is feeling
· What had happened to them that made them go to where they are now
· What are they thinking about?
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