Dulce et Decorum est – annotation in progress

“like old beggars under sacks” – simile – dirty, dressed in rags

“coughing like hags” – simile – coughing as though they are sick

“Men marched asleep” – metaphor – exhausted

“blood-shod” – “shod” means to be wearing shoes – feet are covered with blood – sounds like “blood-shed”

“drunk with fatigue” – metaphor – suggests they are not walking straight – not fully in control – because they are so tired

“Gas! Gas!” – Exclamation marks show fear/ panic

“yelling”, “stumbling”, “floundering” – succession of verbs show failure to get the mask on

“drowning” – metaphor – can’t breathe – surrounded by green gas – looks like water

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