• …conveys the point understandably
• …expresses the point clearly
• …makes the point clear
• …articulates the point well

He then goes on…

• He elucidates…
• He expands on this by saying…
• He develops this idea…
• He clarifies this by saying…

Anyone can relate to…

• A universally understandable idea
• Understandable to the reader
• A connection any audience can make with the text/ characters/ idea

Always talk of “the audience” or “the reader”

Quotes should be maximum of two lines – cut them if necessary