These are the ideas we came up with in class. Remember, the best writing includes:
1. Thoughts
2. Feelings
3. Detail
How you are doing.
Evicted – running out of money.
Can’t buy food.
Has to beg for money.
Can’t get a job – looks manky.
Getting thrown out of your room.
The mean landlord.
Getting ripped off.
Losing your doorway.
Stolen watch.
Attitudes of the public to homeless people.
Loneliness.
Ginger – a little help.
Relationship with Vince.
How things changed when he arrived.
What Vince said/ did with Carole.
Want to come home – make things like they used to be.