These are the ideas we came up with in class. Remember, the best writing includes:

1. Thoughts
2. Feelings
3. Detail

How you are doing.
Evicted – running out of money.
Can’t buy food.
Has to beg for money.
Can’t get a job – looks manky.

Getting thrown out of your room.
The mean landlord.
Getting ripped off.
Losing your doorway.
Stolen watch.

Attitudes of the public to homeless people.

Loneliness.

Ginger – a little help.

Relationship with Vince.
How things changed when he arrived.
What Vince said/ did with Carole.

Want to come home – make things like they used to be.